[ Holonet ] To Bisidn embassy: Trade Fleet expansion
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"Dear Senator of the Federal Republic of Bisidn,
It has come to our attention that the Federal Republic of Bisidn is currently expanding its trade fleets. The Praetorian Empire is capable of providing large amounts of
for a decent price. We can offer you large quantities of
for only 5
/
. If you are interested we would like to hear back from you as soon as possible. We are open to negotiating for a quantity discount and a long term arrangement.
Greetings,
Senator Ardios Eldrilith"
It has come to our attention that the Federal Republic of Bisidn is currently expanding its trade fleets. The Praetorian Empire is capable of providing large amounts of
for a decent price. We can offer you large quantities of
for only 5
/
. If you are interested we would like to hear back from you as soon as possible. We are open to negotiating for a quantity discount and a long term arrangement. Greetings,
Senator Ardios Eldrilith"
"Dear Senator Ardios Eldrilith,
We were pleasantly surprised by your offer - we indeed have an interest in increasing our trade fleet.
I have spoken with my people about your offer, and we are willing to purchase a total of 1500
MTCF's provided they meet with our quality requirements. How long would your world need to finish an order of that size?
At your proposed price, we would pay 7500
for the
MTCF's. We believe this is a bit excessive. We would propose a 10% discount for the size of our order. Would this be agreeable?
To establish if our quality requirements are met, we would like some of our engineers be involved in the production process. They would inspect the
MTCF production process to ensure quality. Naturally if you have important trade secrets, they need not have access to those - our intent is merely to establish our product meets criteria for structural integrity, electronics quality and safety.
Thank you again for contacting us - we are certain we can come to a mutually profitable arrangement.
With the highest possible regards,
Senator Shahkra of the Federal Republic of Bisidn"
We were pleasantly surprised by your offer - we indeed have an interest in increasing our trade fleet.
I have spoken with my people about your offer, and we are willing to purchase a total of 1500
MTCF's provided they meet with our quality requirements. How long would your world need to finish an order of that size?At your proposed price, we would pay 7500
for the
MTCF's. We believe this is a bit excessive. We would propose a 10% discount for the size of our order. Would this be agreeable?To establish if our quality requirements are met, we would like some of our engineers be involved in the production process. They would inspect the
MTCF production process to ensure quality. Naturally if you have important trade secrets, they need not have access to those - our intent is merely to establish our product meets criteria for structural integrity, electronics quality and safety.Thank you again for contacting us - we are certain we can come to a mutually profitable arrangement.
With the highest possible regards,
Senator Shahkra of the Federal Republic of Bisidn"
"Dear Senator Shahkra,
We are thankful for your quick reaction. We are pleased that you are willing to place such a large order and we will therefor agree on the 10% discount.
Our
department has informed me that we are capable of supplying the 1500
in 15
. We will supply them in batches of 100 or 200. We can start in
37 and should finish in
51.
When it comes to the payment we are fine with 450
in each of these 15
or your faction could transfer 450
for every 100
that we transfer in the
in question.
We will allow for your engineers to take part in the inspections and quality control of the
that are custom made for Bisidn.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask them.
Greetings,
Senator Ardios Eldrilith"
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We are thankful for your quick reaction. We are pleased that you are willing to place such a large order and we will therefor agree on the 10% discount.
Our
department has informed me that we are capable of supplying the 1500
in 15
. We will supply them in batches of 100 or 200. We can start in
37 and should finish in
51.When it comes to the payment we are fine with 450
in each of these 15
or your faction could transfer 450
for every 100
that we transfer in the
in question.We will allow for your engineers to take part in the inspections and quality control of the
that are custom made for Bisidn.If you have any questions, feel free to ask them.
Greetings,
Senator Ardios Eldrilith"
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Last edited by Senator Ardios Eldrilith on Thu Feb 16, 2012 9:21 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"Dear Senator Ardios Eldrilith,
Excellent to hear we have an agreement! A steady supply of 100
MTCF per turn for the next 15
turns is most reasonable. We shall pay 450
each turn as you ship the MTCF.
If your people would be willing to draw up the paperwork necessary, I shall have my government sign at once so we can start shipments immediately.
Shall we make a collective press statement about this? I am sure the news will be positively received.
((OOC: If you agree, I'll make an 'economic news' post in the UCN thread - you should make an entry for the trade to process in the turn reports yourself though ^_^))
Excellent to hear we have an agreement! A steady supply of 100
MTCF per turn for the next 15
turns is most reasonable. We shall pay 450
each turn as you ship the MTCF.If your people would be willing to draw up the paperwork necessary, I shall have my government sign at once so we can start shipments immediately.
Shall we make a collective press statement about this? I am sure the news will be positively received.
((OOC: If you agree, I'll make an 'economic news' post in the UCN thread - you should make an entry for the trade to process in the turn reports yourself though ^_^))
Due to the fact that we have to free up a trade fleet to ship the
we have to delay the first 100
. We could start with 200
in
38 and follow with 100
for 13
or we could delay the whole project for one
and finish in
52.
When we have finished the deal and signed the papers we can make the press release.
we have to delay the first 100
. We could start with 200
in
38 and follow with 100
for 13
or we could delay the whole project for one
and finish in
52.When we have finished the deal and signed the papers we can make the press release.
"A one turn delay will not cause any problems. Let us start in
turn 38 and finish in
turn 52 and make a collective press statement after the paperwork is finished as you suggest."
turn 38 and finish in
turn 52 and make a collective press statement after the paperwork is finished as you suggest.""Dear Senator Shahkra of the Federal Republic of Bisidn,
It is already 10
ago that our first shipment of
was dispatched to your system. I would like to personally check with you if everything is in order.
If there are any problems that need to be resolved, do not hesitate to ask.
Furthermore we were wondering if your faction is willing to increase the volume of our agreement or might know another Union world that is ready to expand his trade fleets. We have one of our
production lines ready at
55."
It is already 10
ago that our first shipment of
was dispatched to your system. I would like to personally check with you if everything is in order. If there are any problems that need to be resolved, do not hesitate to ask.
Furthermore we were wondering if your faction is willing to increase the volume of our agreement or might know another Union world that is ready to expand his trade fleets. We have one of our
production lines ready at
55.""Senator,
At this time, we have no major complaints about the Mass Transit Cargo Freighters you have delivered. Our quality assurance officers have reported that they are receiving the full cooperation of your people and they are very pleased with the progress.
We are not currently looking to expand the amount of
we wish to buy, however we will remember your offer should this situation change.
Thank you for your continued excellent level of service!"
At this time, we have no major complaints about the Mass Transit Cargo Freighters you have delivered. Our quality assurance officers have reported that they are receiving the full cooperation of your people and they are very pleased with the progress.
We are not currently looking to expand the amount of
we wish to buy, however we will remember your offer should this situation change.Thank you for your continued excellent level of service!"
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