Fwurg

[Mercury]

Alitaera System was added. Going to have a look at the Sekhmet System (which is already on the map) next!

[Mercury]

Osiris, orbit 4.2, has Extreme Crevasses and Solidified Core. One of those gives a +5 to crystals, but the other a -5 penalty to the same. This is totally allowed, but I just wanted to be sure that was what you wanted, as those 2 together have the same effect as the Tranquility climate. If its intentional, then thats cool of course!

I moved Nut, your extended Heliosheath, from orbit 9 to orbit 10, because it must take up the outermost orbit (even if the orbit next to it is empty)

You're missing a tertiary zone - otherwise the zones look good

I removed the {{'s from a lot of image references and I changed some incorrectly formatted data.

Specials and population are okay

Gas and Rock are good. Biowise, I think you have 8 left to spend.

I count:

Type IV on Toth 7
Type IV on Aten 7
Oceans on Isis 7
Type IV on Osiris 7
Type I on Tefnut 76
Oceans on Tefnut 19
Natural Life on Tefnut 19
Type III on Shu 6
Type IV on Set 19
4.5 billion pop 25
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192 bio

Also, your power on Tefnut is cutting it a bit close. You may want to transfer some from nearby orbits in case you are going to put more zones there.

Finally, I noticed your Sith character. We don't forbit playing a Sith, but please keep in mind this is a cooperative game. The way he is, he looks fine btw

[Patrick]

Hello,

My idea as to the climate of osiris was that it would sort of be a dead planet, real barren and such, like Osiris.

I have placed my tertiary zone, so ive got all of them.
I have spent my spare bio (on population on Tefnut) and finally I have updated my Sith page, so I hope that clarify's things (The Sith is Dead, Long Live the Tefnutians!)

[Mercury]

Your system looks good now! The Embers of Aten are hereby approved!

[Zoreone Abaroa]

Xi-Tra system

[Mercury]

Everything looks to be in working order! You are hereby officially approved. I will make an official announcement of your joining with the Chancellor tomorrow evening - in the meanwhile, feel free to get started on roleplaying

Welcome to Fwurg!

[mvdenk]

Please approve the Limëan Republic (for minor world)!

[Mercury]

Limëan Republic approved! Looks like a very interesting world that can lead some very interesting discussions ^_^

[Elmer]

Please approve the Teprogrenaian Consensus (for protectorate)

[Brend]

You did not ask for your Jedi Padawan Fecta Trigiel to be checked, but as this he is the main point of you playing a protectorate, I had a look anyway:

• You have not spent your +1 Mind attribute point from Analytical
• You have not yet spent +1 on a Rare Elements related skill (but you do mention that explicitly)

The rest (faction + system + 2 races; have I missed anything?) looks good to me -- but you should really try and get images for both your races.

If you a) update your Jedi to incorporate the bonus points and get a Jedi Auditor to check him, and b) remove the WIP tags from both race and system pages, you're good to go!

[Mercury]

The Teprogrenaian Consensus is approved! Do check your Jedi though as Brend suggested.