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[Dragonmaster352]

hi everyone
I'm still a bit new here so I wonderd if I could get some tips to improve this system

50
- red/white binary star 19 mass
- brown dwarf cold orbit 5 mass
- brown dwarf cold orbit 5 mass
21 : 21
123
- medium planet 19 mass
- small planet 7 mass
- large moon 11x 77 mass
20 : 20
220
- medium planet type I atmosphere 76 mass
- natural life medium planet 19 mass
- water ocean medium planet 19 mass
- molten rock ocean small planet 7 mass
- large moon type II atmosphere 2x 42 mass
- large moon natural life 2x 14 mass
- large moon water ocean 2x 14 mass
- large moon liquid methane ocean 2x 14 mass
according to my calculations that leaves 15 for population = 1,5
5
- trinary system 2
- captured moon 1
- retrograde axis spin 1
- retrograde orbit 1

red/white binary star

orbit 1: small planet
- large moon
- molten rock ocean
- retrograde axis spin
orbit 2: medium planet
- captured moon
- large moon
- natural life
- type I atmosphere
- water ocean
- tranquillity, extreme crevasses, wet climate
orbit 3: brown dwarf
- trinary system (blue main sequence star)(moons become goldilocks)
- large moon
- natural life
- type II atmosphere
- water ocean
- high pressure, continuous tempests, short winter
- large moon
- natural life
- type II atmosphere
- water ocean
- wet climate, solidified core, tranquillity
- large moon
- large moon
- large moon
orbit 4: brown dwarf
- large moon
- liquid methane ocean
- retrograde orbit
- large moon
- liquid methane ocean
- large moon
- large moon

any tips or comments are welcome
if you have any questions feel free to ask
btw. population will be human and I plan to concentrate on , and

[Chriz]

Trinary System with a lot of large moons is a common choice and a pretty good one.
= ok
= ok
= ok

Only thing I would suggest is reconsidering:
- retrograde axis spin 1
- retrograde orbit 1

Replacing them with for example Jackpots, for the +200 that is most welcome in a starting system.
Homeworld is kind of tricky since you did not create earth, but still if your race is Human-like it could still be an option.

And finally, I think the product choice should work out pretty well in the current economic climate.

[Mercury]

I'd rather not have a human Homeworld listed for story reasons. Since humans are rather commonplace it would lead to unfortunate competition. Since Jackpot is absolutely better than Homeworld anyway, I'd definitely go with that if you want, but actually your special choices are fine and I do not believe they require adjustment.

Don't forget you get 2.0 for free, so that's 3.5 total, not 1.5!

[Dragonmaster352]

ok thanks I'll change those two
might go with that idea of a human looking race, already got some ideas on that
hope changing my senators race won't cause any confusion