approval for my system please

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approval for my system please

Post Fedor » Sun Aug 12, 2012 4:53 pm
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I've finished my System

The system resources spending is explained in my namespace.
All population is on Enthor.
4 first tier zones are on Eio, 4 on Enthor and the last 4 on Pythia. 6 second tier zones are on Enthor. The augmentation zone is on Eio. The power zone is on Erayo, Enthor's moon. The Open Market Zone is on Meydo. Though not neccesary a power overview is also present at the botom of the kal system.

My senator will be Atheos, who will be promoted from representative.

Further I have used the Homeworld special on Enthor, which currently has a Type IV atmosphere with natural life, despite the requirement for homeworld being a type II or I atmosphere, oceans and natural life. This is due to the atmosphere of Enthor being significantly worse then when life first evolved there due to the Ragnarok event(description in the Kal System page), who'se description I still intend to expand further on. But it is the homeworld of the Astai and therefore I chose to use that special there. I hope this is acceptable.

I do intend to add more descriptions of say planets but this has no impact on the data, which is in place.

Also, lots of factions have a Hyperspace Lane in their system, and I've heard something about a union law that puts one in your system, how does this work?
Post Chriz » Sun Aug 12, 2012 5:56 pm
Chriz
 
I checked your system.

(:gas-mass) , (:rock-mass) and (:bio-mass) are ok.
The specials are ok with me. If Mercury agrees on the Homeworld special than it should be no problem.

About the zones: You already listed the Homeworld special in the zone description but you did not calculate it yet. (all zones on Enthor should have a 10 higher production)
Rest of the zones are correct.

Your power is incorrect. Heavy gravity world only gets power from one orbit...

When these things are fixed and approved your system is finished.

The Hyperspace lane will be build when you are a inner world. This can take a few turns.
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Post Fedor » Sun Aug 12, 2012 6:26 pm
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I changed the Power Consumption and corrected the production.
I also moved zones around, Eio now has 6 metals zones and Pythia has 6 gasses zones, now Enthor only has 6 second tier zones, the power consumption is now okay when you move power from the closest astroid belts to Enthor and Pythia.
Post Brend » Sun Aug 12, 2012 6:59 pm
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You know. At first, I had no problem with using Homeworld.

But after thinking it over for some time the "The world is perfectly adapted to them, or rather, they are to it." flavour text seems to be at odds with the whole Ragnarok concept...

I don't see an issue mechanically though.
Post Fedor » Sun Aug 12, 2012 10:31 pm
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Well, they are very adapted to the world, the world just not to them.
Ragnarok was a long time ago, with the moon of eio crashing into the planet, the debris of that has already settled so it has been a long time. It is atmosphere IV, but they did evolve for that.
Post Brend » Mon Aug 13, 2012 12:24 am
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That sounds like enough justification for me.

It would also serve as a great basis for a racial characteristic of sorts... Not sure what it should do though :P
Post Fedor » Mon Aug 13, 2012 8:29 pm
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As the homeworld special is overpowered here and shouldn't really fit on the world I'm changing that into a jackpot special that I'm using on one of the gasses zones on Pythia.
Post Brend » Mon Aug 13, 2012 8:33 pm
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Approved

(Auditors: Chriz, Gerben, myself)
Post Chriz » Mon Aug 13, 2012 8:35 pm
Chriz
 
You can now officially ask the chancellor to change the status of your world to Inner world in the politics forum.

Starting this (:turn) ( 63 ) you can post your turn report in the Administrative Actions forum.
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