Proposal: the Carcharoth System
13 -5 is a very nice similar location as well.
Player of the Praetorian Empire
I'll take 13 -5 then
I did some fixes on the zones on your home planet.
Are you sure you don't want your jackpot on rare elements to make your system produce more tax?
Are you sure you don't want your jackpot on rare elements to make your system produce more tax?
Player of the Praetorian Empire
I might do a final tweak but.. fixes? Why'd my info production just go from 1100 to 900?
That was my bad. When we added zones, we accidentally counted double upgrades on some zones. Chriz fixed that so the zone had the correct production.
I removed the double upgrade.
Added the Solidified Core climate from Underworld (and calculated the +5 information)
Corrected the Ancient ruins to +15 information per zone. (This was +10 a long time ago before the rules changed)
If you are done tweaking, tell us so we can do a final check.
Added the Solidified Core climate from Underworld (and calculated the +5 information)
Corrected the Ancient ruins to +15 information per zone. (This was +10 a long time ago before the rules changed)
If you are done tweaking, tell us so we can do a final check.
Player of the Praetorian Empire
A bit of a nitpick: The Caldoss-Wakuu page states that the planet's atmosphere 'is now classified as Type II, due to a rampant greenhouse effect and the presence of poisonous contaminants'. However, this directly contradicts the fluff of Tranquillity which states 'Due to the absence of interactive rare elements and gasses...'. This is completely allowed, and is no matter with respect to the rules. However, given your (Caldoss') strong RP focus it seems a bit weird.
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Mercury - Storyteller
Geston-Wakuu was listed as a Small Planet because of its double planet status. For consistency sake, I changed it to Large Moon. This has no game effect whatsoever, but is merely done to keep our completely arbitrary system of planets with moons consistent.
Damned reality, always being more complicated than our simple models *grumbles*.
Damned reality, always being more complicated than our simple models *grumbles*.
((The whole 'double planet' data is useless. That's just fluff anyway. I propose to drop that field.))
Alright, I've made the changes I wanted to make! Moved the augmentation zone and one tier one resource zone from Caldoss to Heston-Wakuu.
With regards to the whole double planet thing: fine. As for the 'Tranquil' thing that Brend mentioned, yeah, that's right. It is a different kind of fluff than I'd have written for myself but it seemed silly to introduce a new variable with the same effect.
Anyway...
AUDIT PLZ!
With regards to the whole double planet thing: fine. As for the 'Tranquil' thing that Brend mentioned, yeah, that's right. It is a different kind of fluff than I'd have written for myself but it seemed silly to introduce a new variable with the same effect.
Anyway...
AUDIT PLZ!
Ill do a full check up tonight.
Player of the Praetorian Empire
Remaining resources:
gas mass: 12
rock mass: 28
bio mass: 0
special-points: 0
Total zones: 87
converted to bio: 40 -> 4.0 population
population: 2 + 4 = 6 billion.
4.9 on homeworld Caldoss-Wakuu
0.3 on Ascension
1.0 on Pruela
0.1 on Heston Wakuu
6.3 total. (too much)
Minor fix: Chalybs-Wakuu – Removed climates (climates only in Goldilocks orbit)
Rest of the system seems in order.
12 raw material zones
6 product zones
1 augmentation zone
1 power zone
1 open market zone
3 trade fleets.
1 holonet station
all assets placed.
As far as I know all zones are correct.
Please fix your population when you read this.
gas mass: 12
rock mass: 28
bio mass: 0
special-points: 0
Total zones: 87
converted to bio: 40 -> 4.0 population
population: 2 + 4 = 6 billion.
4.9 on homeworld Caldoss-Wakuu
0.3 on Ascension
1.0 on Pruela
0.1 on Heston Wakuu
6.3 total. (too much)
Minor fix: Chalybs-Wakuu – Removed climates (climates only in Goldilocks orbit)
Rest of the system seems in order.
12 raw material zones
6 product zones
1 augmentation zone
1 power zone
1 open market zone
3 trade fleets.
1 holonet station
all assets placed.
As far as I know all zones are correct.
Please fix your population when you read this.
Player of the Praetorian Empire
System Approved.
As far as I know you are ready to join as an Inner World.
You can contact the Union now in the General forum. Introduce your faction and ask to join the Union.
As far as I know you are ready to join as an Inner World.
You can contact the Union now in the General forum. Introduce your faction and ask to join the Union.
Player of the Praetorian Empire


