Approval: Veolian Settlement 1 system design

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Brend
 
I have designed a system for my first settlement and would like for someone to validate it:
Settlement 1 system
Base Resources: 25 (:gas-mass) (with 2 (:gas-mass)(:rock-mass)), 70 (:rock-mass)
Extra Resources: 1 (:special-point) (Active Sun: Orbit 2 (:cold-orbit)(:gold-orbit))

Star: Red Orange Binary Star (18 (:gas-mass) → 1 (:goldilocks-orbit), 3 (:cold-orbit))

Orbit 1 ( (:gold-orbit) ): Medium Planet (19 (:rock-mass)) + Medium Moon (3 (:rock-mass))
Orbit 2 ( (:gold-orbit) ): Jovian Giant (5 (:gas-mass)) + Large Moon (7 (:rock-mass)) + Large Moon (7 (:rock-mass)) + Large Moon (7 (:rock-mass))
Orbit 3 ( (:cold-orbit) ): Medium Planet (19 (:rock-mass))
Orbit 4 ( (:cold-orbit) ): Asteroid Belt (3 (:rock-mass)) + Large Moon (7 (:rock-mass))

I plan on scanning for a settlement system in (:sector) 10 -4. Scanning time would be 20+10 (:turns).

I will come up with names and such when I have actually done the surveying ^_^
Post Fedor » Sun Sep 07, 2014 11:29 pm
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It checks out
Post Elmer » Sun Sep 07, 2014 11:36 pm
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I have looked at it, and I didn't find any errors. :)
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Post Brend » Sun Sep 07, 2014 11:44 pm
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Ok cool. With two sets of eyes having checked this, I will close this thread.

If someone else finds a problem, please let me know ^_^
Post Brend » Sun Jun 07, 2015 10:59 pm
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Just so I won't have to search for the names later on:

System: Adii Nasla System

0.1 red: Mithuna
0.2 orange: Rasi
1.0 Medium planet: Nayi
1.1 Medium moon: Nayi-an
2.0 Jovian giant: Irdara
2.1 Large moon: Asla
2.3 Large moon: Laki
2.2 Large moon: Krafla
3.0 Medium planet: Aneka
4.0 Asteroid belt: Thikara Belt
4.1 Large moon: Yil
Post Brend » Mon Jul 20, 2015 8:32 pm
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I have created the necessary system and planet pages: Adii Nasla System.

Someone please review them for approval.
Post Dragonmaster352 » Mon Jul 20, 2015 9:04 pm
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One issue:

Active sun special needs to be applied to the specific orbit not the star. See here

Please correct.
Post Brend » Mon Jul 20, 2015 9:15 pm
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I'm afraid that you are mistaken. The special is applied to the Star (or Binary Star), but it only improves a single orbit. See Shas, CEDACEC0 and Nevasa as examples.
Post Dragonmaster352 » Mon Jul 20, 2015 9:22 pm
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Then either the note on the Active Sun page is misleading or everyone has made this error.
Post Brend » Mon Jul 20, 2015 9:30 pm
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Dragonmaster352 wrote:Then either the note on the Active Sun page is misleading or everyone has made this error.


I agree that it is a little ambiguous. In fact, we have already had a whole topic about it about two years ago: Active Sun is impossible to write down correctly o_O

Why we did not clarify this on the atual wiki page is beyond my understanding. Something about soon™ probably. I'll edit the page immediately!


EDIT: Updated the Active Sun page. Please check if this is more clear. If it is not, feel free to edit.
Last edited by Brend on Mon Jul 20, 2015 9:45 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Derped link to Active Sun. Fixed now!
Post Dragonmaster352 » Mon Jul 20, 2015 9:43 pm
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It is clear now.

Note: the link in your post is wrong, it doesn't lead to the Active Sun page.
Post Brend » Fri Jul 31, 2015 5:44 pm
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Since no further problems with the system pages have been mentioned, I'm assuming that everything is in order. If not, we'll fix it in then.

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